From damien at rdrop.com  Wed Dec 17 06:40:04 2008
From: damien at rdrop.com (Damien)
Date: Wed, 17 Dec 2008 06:40:04 -0800
Subject: [RFD] Breitenbush RFD proofs
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Pan,

What is the easiest way for you to receive proof-read edits?

Damien

Wayne Bund wrote:
> Hey gang,
>
> Here's the proof of the 26 pages of the Breitenbush section for the 
> upcoming RFD. I am in need of some proofreading with these pages, so 
> it would be great if you could look over the pages and give some 
> feedback. Direct the feedback to me and Kwai. I have attached the 
> proofs as a 26 single page PDF. There are still two pages that need 
> images, and a few more with changes needed.
>
> Please feel free to provide feedback around editorial content, 
> grammer, style, appearence, etc.
>
> Almost done!
> Pan
>
> ps let me know if you aren't able to read the proof
>